Compulsive Proofreader: WE MISS YOU!

My dear friend Mr. Pat discovered this gem at a mall in the Bay Area.  After a few trips to mall he had to point out the error to a retail clerk.  Funny they had not noticed it before.

I post this to show my respect for the Compulsive Proofreader.  A one time blogger who shared his compulsion with all of us.  I know he is very busy, but we miss him all the same.

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2 thoughts on “Compulsive Proofreader: WE MISS YOU!

  1. You said:
    My dear friend Mr. Pat discovered this gem at a mall in the Bay Area. After a few trips to mall he had to point out the error to a retail clerk. Funny they had not noticed it before.

    I post this to show my respect for the Compulsive Proofreader. A one time blogger who shared his compulsion with all of us. I know he is very busy, but we miss him all the same.

    Corrected Verse:

    My dear friend, Mr. Pat, discovered this gem at a mall in the Bay Area. After a few trips to the mall he had to point out the error to a retail clerk. He found it funny that they had noticed the error before.

    I post this to show my respect for the Compulsive Proofreader. He was a one time blogger who shared his compulsion with all of us and I know he is very busy, but we miss him all the same.

    Errors Reported:

    Missing word and commas, incorrect grammar application, numerous run on sentences.

    Score: 6/10

    Recommendation: English Grammar for Dummies

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